Flat Plan - Feedback

Sana Kurshied: 
Cover page - Th drawing of the model is amazing, it seems very realistic, you've used most of the conventions which goes well with the layout of the cover. You could have added a price.
Contents page- The layout, again, is really good. The colours go well together and there is nothing I would change about it.
Double page spread- The image is good, the layout is clear you could probably add a pull quote on the image. But overall the magazine is amazing.

Neran Gurses:
Cover page- The drawing is very high standard and the shot is good as the eye level is where you want your audience to look at. Try not to over pack the text too much around the image. What colours will you be using, specify.
Content page- Nice layout, clear and bold to read and attractive good angles of camera shots.
Double page spread- Good facial expression and body language relates to your genre 'pop'. Title could be a bit smaller, but I like the layout of this text.

Zahra Butt: 
Cover page- Writing and font isn't very clear. Using more colour and images. Make the title and logo clearer. Th eyes match the letters, nice.
Contents page - New contents page is much better, I prefer it way more than the old one because of how professional it looks now.
Double page spread- Nice layout of article, but add some more images maybe another pull quote on the left side of the page.

Charlotte Boyce:
Cover page- Beautifully drawn portrait/ close up of the artist. Needs a contrast between the background and font. Make the logo stand out more, I would also prefer the logo to be blue to flow better with the colour scheme.
Contents page- Clear layout but make colours bolder.
Double page spread- Nice image I like where its placed.Maybe give more space between the text don't squish it all into a corner.

Paula Graham:
Cover page- I really like the layout, I can tell that you've thought about your colour scheme, font and writing/text size. I like that it is very detailed without looking like it's too much.
Contents page- Your pictures are detailed and are located are reasonable places. You should add an editors note where the bottom left picture is.
Double page spread- You should include more colours. I like the way the image goes onto both pages.